Audhudf. I adopted her from *
Taremimi I wanted to try lineless drawing and ughhh. It took a couple of days, but I am finally okay with submitting it. -n-;;
She is the daughter of a Finnish factory owner during the 17th century. They moved to Italy where she met orphaned and poor Fiore who was now a worker in the factory. Even though they can barely understand one another, they are best friends and she helps him when she can.I actually would like some critique, but don't be too hateful about it and be sure to be constructive! I need to get better ;;
Suvi, art (c) me
Original design (c) *
Taremimi
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I noticed that her eyes don't look quite right. One eyeball is slanted too far up. They should be in the same position. When they are like this they make her look cross eyed. Her mouth also seems pretty small. It could be slightly larger, but not much at all. The background is really pretty. But it looks a little fuzzy.
Like I said you did a great job on this piece. I hope my Critique helped some. Keep drawing!
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