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+Suvi+ by Clue000 +Suvi+ by Clue000
Audhudf. I adopted her from *Taremimi I wanted to try lineless drawing and ughhh. It took a couple of days, but I am finally okay with submitting it. -n-;;

She is the daughter of a Finnish factory owner during the 17th century. They moved to Italy where she met orphaned and poor Fiore who was now a worker in the factory. Even though they can barely understand one another, they are best friends and she helps him when she can.

I actually would like some critique, but don't be too hateful about it and be sure to be constructive! I need to get better ;;

Suvi, art (c) me
Original design (c) *Taremimi
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You did a nice job on this piece. Her hair is wonderful! And the shading on her skin is great! I love how you made the hair shine.

I noticed that her eyes don't look quite right. One eyeball is slanted too far up. They should be in the same position. When they are like this they make her look cross eyed. Her mouth also seems pretty small. It could be slightly larger, but not much at all. The background is really pretty. But it looks a little fuzzy.

Like I said you did a great job on this piece. I hope my Critique helped some. Keep drawing!
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TheEmerald Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
x3 She looks great! Her hair, horns, and eyes are all very detailed and pretty ;u;
The only thing critiquey I can think of is that the BG looks a bit low-res and pixely D;
Keep up the nice word, cluee~
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Clue000 Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I liked that about the background. I did notice it though and I know why it happened- but I'll keep that in mind and try for happy mediums.

Thanks.
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covert15 Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2012  Student Digital Artist
This is pretty!
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Clue000 Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
;; Thank you so much!<33
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covert15 Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2012  Student Digital Artist
You're welcome so much!
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