Very cute~! The perspective on her outstretched arm is a little messed up (her upper arm looks too long and her lower arm looks too short; actually, her arm looks a little awkward in general from that position) and her hand almost entirely disappeared but I like everything else about this, particularly your shading~!
I agree about not being happy with the perspective, particularly her limbs xD It started out as a crappy, lazy sketch but then I just kept going until it looked like this. So I did not properly stop and check everything out. Though I will say her hand is supposed to be barely visible under the plate o-o; Either way, thank you for the helpful critique.
You're welcome~! Her limbs are pretty fine for the most part, just her arm was messed up~. I understand if you just keep going from a sketch, I do that too sometimes~. And fair enough, if the hand was supposed to look like that; I just figured you'd see some of her knuckles because of the way she was holding the plate, but nevermind that~. I'm glad you find my critique helpful; I wish I could tell you how to fix it better but I'm still a beginner to perspective myself. ^^
It turned out really nice
*gobbles up the cake*
Well just ignore me, then. XD You're very welcome~! We sure do!