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*ENTWINED-PARR Apr 12, 2013  Professional General Artist
tehe I remember this one. :D
It turned out really nice :heart:

*gobbles up the cake*
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*Clue000 Apr 12, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
;n; I don't really like it. It was going to be a really shitty sketch but I kept going, so the proportions ended up coming out really badly.

:la: Yay kekki
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*ENTWINED-PARR Apr 13, 2013  Professional General Artist
aww well, I do like it. :heart:
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~xTaini Feb 23, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Very cute~! :heart: The perspective on her outstretched arm is a little messed up (her upper arm looks too long and her lower arm looks too short; actually, her arm looks a little awkward in general from that position) and her hand almost entirely disappeared but I like everything else about this, particularly your shading~!
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*Clue000 Feb 23, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I agree about not being happy with the perspective, particularly her limbs xD It started out as a crappy, lazy sketch but then I just kept going until it looked like this. So I did not properly stop and check everything out. Though I will say her hand is supposed to be barely visible under the plate o-o; Either way, thank you for the helpful critique. :la:
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~xTaini Feb 23, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You're welcome~! :D Her limbs are pretty fine for the most part, just her arm was messed up~. I understand if you just keep going from a sketch, I do that too sometimes~. And fair enough, if the hand was supposed to look like that; I just figured you'd see some of her knuckles because of the way she was holding the plate, but nevermind that~. I'm glad you find my critique helpful; I wish I could tell you how to fix it better but I'm still a beginner to perspective myself. ^^
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*Clue000 Feb 23, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
XDD I did draw her knuckles. :giggle: But yeah ;u; Thanks again :la: We all have a lot to learn~
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~xTaini Feb 23, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You did? :iconpapcryplz: Oh my gosh I'm blind! /shot

Well just ignore me, then. XD You're very welcome~! We sure do! :D
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*Clue000 Feb 23, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
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~xTaini Feb 23, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
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